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TONIGHT'S MASTERCLASS IN SCREENWRITING SPECIAL GUEST

ERIC WILLIAMS
MANAGER, PRODUCER AND PRESIDENT OF
ZERO GRAVITY TONIGHT

JULY 28, 2010



STORY & SCREENPLAY - SEPTEMBER - 2010!

Go from idea to completed Screenplay!
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Read Testimonials from The Story &Screenplay Class

Dear Screenwriters


Story and Screenplay is coming in September.

We spend One month on your Story.
We spend 7 weeks on the Screenplay

It's been two years since we offered this.

It is a big undertaking but we find that taking a screenwriting course like this,
where you finish your screenplay is the biggest step forward most of us make.
People who have taken this class have won Nicholls,
been signed by agents and have optioned the scripts they write in this class.


It's powerful.


In this class we go from idea to completed screenplay.
You can join with just an idea or a completed screenplay but we're going to go from
inception to completion!

If you have taken this before you now it is one of our best communal experiences,
it's powerful and it's fun. It is transformational and beyond Story beats.
It is a class that is taught the way screenwriters write.

There is nothing like the experience of completing a screenplay!

Let me know if you're interested!

WHAT IS IT LIKE? ARE YOU ONLINE? WHAT IF I MISS A CLASS?
Screenwriters Online started Screenwriting Classes on the internet in February of 1996 with
Genius Screenwriter, Michael Tolkin (The Player, Deep Impact)
We have always been a live - online class!
We created the most fertile, creative, comfortable and effective
interactive online format on the internet.
Our students- screenwriters, really, finish their screenplays.
We have always believed in one on one writing classes
- with immediate, constructive feedback -
Using our special interactive
email access and our live online classes
where each writer goes word for word, scene for scene through their pages.
a) first through email, b) next with follow up in our online sessions in our online forum.

ASK YOURSELF:

DO I WANT TO COMPLETE A SCREENPLAY THIS YEAR?
Or spend another year like the one i just spent on other things?

I've got 3 ideas, maybe 10, and I haven't written any of them into scripts!!
do I want to finish one of them this year?
do I want to know the pleasure of holding my own finished screenplay in my arms...?
it is a great feeling of accomplishment.
get it off your plate - there is so much more pleasure to be had in this life -
so much more to do in your writing career...
if you could just get started. - - And finish!

WHAT IS NEXT?
JOIN STORY AND SCREENPLAY

So, if the answer is "Yes, I want to write my screenplay. I've been dreaming about it for years"

Then ask yourself: if not now, why not?

JOIN US

DO IT NOW

Do it LIVE. YES! DO IT LIVE!
We'll do it together
We'll meet you every step of the way.



EMAIL US.
If you want to join, you must email us first.







Screenwriting alone is ONE of the MOST difficult tasks.
Writing with an expert riding shot gun
with you on the journey is a great communal experience
one of accomplishment and pride.

MORE ON STORY AND SCREENPLAY
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"STORY & SCREENPLAY" is Screenwriters Online's
unique 2- part screenwriting class that takes you from your idea to a completed Screenplay.


We spend One month on your Story.
We spend 7 weeks on your Screenplay


STORY:
4 weeks working only on your Story: At the end of the session,
you'll have an ironclad two page treatment from which to write a screenplay;
or to use to interest producers and others in the possibility of a future screenplay.
But the Future is Now. The time to write your screenplay is now.


The STORY class will support your NEED to
tell the story you have inside of you and feed your creativity.
Under our expert guidance, you will find the true story you're wanting to tell,
and draw out what is hidden, lay aside the dead ends, remove the extraneous,
and suggest ideas to enrich your plot, strengthen it,
as well as ignite your imagination and passion
to tell the world your wonderful story on screen.




One of the joys of the STORY class, is working together.
Even though you work one on one with out excellent instructor, we do it together, too.
This class will dispel the fog that can sometimes descend on you when
working alone. You are given feedback on every page you write and rewrite.
The energy and empowerment of writing this way
is thrilling - and addicting.




In this class we're going to basically nail down your story (even if
you've already written the screenplay.) Yes, it's a bit like being
in "Studio development 101." If it approximates the STUDIO EXPERIENCE,
but believe me, it's far more benign and honest, and true to your
creative vision. It's the page by page coaching and development with out the
'studio hell.'


Why a STORY class before a Screenwriting class?
Because if we concentrate on a the flow of your story scene by scene,
and two or three pages of story treatment, we can effectively resolve the
Act II and Act III problems that Screenwriters Online most often hears about from our
the Studio Executives, producers, Agents and Managers who appear here , live , online.


The STORY class will be a great diagnostic tool; and over a
month, the class will be the remedy.


STORY clears the underbrush away and frees you to devote your strength and vision to writing your screenplay!


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SCREENPLAY:
Part two, and a separate class, is devoted to writing the SCREENPLAY.
Over the period of 6 to 7 weeks, you will write an entire screenplay
based on your treatment from the previous STORY class.


Writing, as you know, is a great adventure - but as a business,
it helps when you're grounded in a solid treatment. Why?
Because when your magical side wants to surprise you - it
will be captured in your screenplay.


6 to 7 weeks is plenty of time to write screenplay- but it's work.
However, this is where the screenwriting craft plays off.
Let me know if you're interested!




EMAIL US.
If you want to join, you must email us first.






TESTIMONIALS:

WHAT SCREENWRITERS HAVE SAID ABOUT STORY & SCREENPLAY

You taught me to carve a script from a vague idea, to plot a story with a spine,
to translate this story into vivid images, to breathe life into
two-dimensional characters., to create a setting worth visiting. But, you
taught me more than craft. You taught me not to quit, to dare to dream,
to keep struggling to my feet with a smile....:) Thank you.
I will never forget you or STORY& SCREENPLAY.
Best Always,
Tish


I can't thank you enough for your incredible, honest forthright guidance and
sharp feedback. After I printed my script out in hard copy, and felt the
tangible weight of my ideas, a chill ran over me. I don't know where it will go
from here. The important thing is that I finally wrote it, and like you said
in class once, "I am a vessel to tell this story". So it shall go where
it shall go. With all my heart, I thank you !
Best regards,
Janis


Thanks!

I truly enjoyed the class, and became a better writer.
Plus, got another screenplay under my belt. I started the class with an idea,
but didn't know I could get from A - Z in such a short period of time.
During writing, the story idea changed several times, it was a fun and
interesting process.
Thanks again,
barb


"Prior to the class, I had written a full-length legal comedy. Working with you,
I re-evaluated the genre and realized that this script would not work
as a comedy. As a result, I essentially rewrote nearly the entire script to make it the drama that it was all along.
Teresa


I just wanted to say I feel like I am learning so much by participating in this class.
Not only by receiving your feedback on my own work, but even more so
by reading everyone else's efforts and seeing your feedback to them.
And then reading the rewrites is truly inspiring. :)
KPowell


The most fascinating aspect of the class was having the ability to carry on
in-depth, intelligent conversations about my script with someone who not
only read it but analyzed it carefully and thoughtfully.
You took an exorbitant amount of time analyzing and evaluating our scripts and
thereafter explaining in detail how to make the script much better.
Hats off a million times over for taking the time and care to give all of our
scripts the attention they needed.
Thanks again for all your hard work and patience with us computer-illiterates.
You are awesome!
Take care,
TDavis"


Thanks AGAIN Tony! You're such a champ and have definitely earned your wings
as Guardian Angel of screenwriters!
Your comments and advice mean so much to me and I value all you say -
cyd


I can't believe it's over!!!! What a wonderful whirlwind it was.
I finally feel well equipped to pursue my writing career in a manner that I've
only dreamed of. Finding SOL shall remain one of the bright lights of this year for me.

Much love,
Elaine

LET'S DO IT! I WANT TO JOIN NOW!
















Screenwriters Online wishes to thank:
Jessica Bendinger (Bring It On)
John Hamburg (Along Came Polly, Meet The Parents)
Tony Gayton(Salton Sea, Murder By Numbers)
Jeff Nathanson (Catch Me If You Can, Rush Hour)
Richard LaGravenese (Fisher King, Living Out Loud,)
Scott Frank (Minority Report, Get Shorty,)
Larry Konner(The Sopranos, Mona Lisa Smile,) and
Rich Wilkes (XXX,) fantastic screenwriters all,
Coleman Hough,("Full Frontal,")
for great online sessions this year!!

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BARRY LEVINSON - TALKS ABOUT SCREENWRITING

dialogue, character, rejection, and motivation

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Screenwriter, Paul Haggis!

  • PAUL HAGGIS was a GREAT,
    INSPIRING guest at Screenwriters Online.

    We've been rooting for him and his films for the last two years.Since Million Dollar Baby!
    Paul has slaved and dedicated himself to his craft
    and to his ideals. It's great when great people are acknolwedged in this way!
    Here's something interesting from his ONLINE MASTERCLASS Session with us.

    QUESTION:
    Sometimes I go to sleep at night and say to myself that this isn't working and I don't know what I'm doing and I'm not going to write anymore. The next morning I get up and my characters are yapping again. At this point in your career, do you ever have such insecure thoughts?
    ANSWER:
    Every single day. You deal with it by writing. You just sit your ass in the chair and write through it. It's the only way to solve your problems. When you come upon a problem, write directly into it. Embracing the problem is often the way to find a really interesting scene. My other trick is to say, 'What awful thing could happen to them right now?' Because sometimes, things are going too well for your characters and you have to give them the worst possible thing that could happen to them.
    Paul Haggis at Screenwriters Online

    QUESTION:
    What type of scripts are hot in Hollywood right now?
    ANSWER:
    Never ever ever ever ever ever think that way. That is the road to failure and hackdom. I just met with Linda Obst this afternoon, and she bemoaned the fact that all young writers are looking for a payday and therefore are writing what they think she wants to see rather than writing what is in their gut, something they have to say. I cannot stress this enough.

    I wrote two spec scripts that I was absolutely sure no one would ever buy: Million Dollar Baby and Crash. They both sold within a couple of years of me writing them, which is very fast.

    If you try and second guess what people want and then provide it, YOU WILL FAIL.
    Guaranteed.
    And never listen to any agent who tells you any different.
    You want to write something unique, something only you know.
    Paul Haggis at Screenwriters Online

    QUESTION:
    How does an unknown make it to Hollywood?
    ANSWER:
    You have to understand that for all intents and purposes, I was "unknown" to the film business four years ago. I had no more advantage or disadvantage than you have. You may not think that truth, but it absolutely is because I had no "heat" coming off any great television show. It was all about the script. If you write a great script and put it in your drawer at your cottage in Muskoka Lake, someone will track it down and find it. If you write a bad script and send 100,000 copies out, it still ain't gonna sell. The trick is really simple: write a great script. And I don't mean to be flip. That's just the truth. Write something that's in your heart, and if you have your craft down and if you're really honest with the characters, it will sell. It just may take some time. I guess that's what you should ask yourself. Not how to sell or market something, but have I written enough and experienced enough to write a good screenplay? You write, you research, you write, you research... What makes a good writer is thousands of pages written.
    Paul Haggis at Screenwriters Online


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Screenwriter, Producer,JJ Abrams!

  • JJ ABRAMS is one of our favorite guests at Screenwriters Online
    Here's a few quotes from his ONLINE MASTERCLASS Session with us

    "I always wanted to direct movies. I didn't know that I wanted to write them or produce them, and I never thought about doing television So, this whole thing has been sort of a surprising ride. I decided I would try to get an opportunity to direct through writing and was lucky ...."
    JJ Abrams at Screenwriters Online

    "I think it's important to - forgive me for stating the obvious - write ONLY WHAT'S NEEDED. What do you see? What do you hear? However, it's also important to give the reader a fun ride. That means that you want to pepper the action with some fun stuff. I actually hate it when the writer talks TO the reader. EXAMPLE: "This chase scene is so great, TRUST ME. You'd rather be watching it than reading it."
    JJ Abrams at Screenwriters Online

    That's funny, I guess, but it takes me the hell out of the moment. I want to GO TO THE MOVIES when I read a script. Keep it simple, but that doesn't mean don't give it a spirit."
    JJ Abrams at Screenwriters Online

    "The best compliment I get is when people say, "When I read that script, I SAW it."

    That's why I love talking to my mother.
    JJ Abrams at Screenwriters Online

    Keep up the great work JJ. You've only just begun!

MORE FROM THE MASTERCLASS WITH PAUL HAGGIS(Crash,Million Dollar Baby):

"On another note...Thanks to Paul Haggis, I took his advice and contacted Sandra Bullock's Agent about my script called PASCAL'S WAGER that I always thought was a perfect fit for her. CAA asked me to send a query by email, and within an hour I had their request for the script! Wow!

I've been trying to break into this business for a long time, but your Master Class did in one three-day session what I'd been unable to doS?get in front of the people who make decisions in Hollywood!
Thanks!
Barbara
Springfield, MO"

"I have received a request for my screenplay from Orlando Bloom's agent. They are sending over the release form to adjoin with it. Thank you so much to Screenwriters Online and Paul Haggis, I have a "toe" in a door! Sincerely,
Dawn Hodson"

FROM THE RECENT BRIAN SHER CLASS (ICM AGENT):

"Brian, you represent some major clients.
Would you consider representing one of us?
Gregg"

Brian Sher: Absolutely. Without a doubt.
That's why I'm here. At Screenwriters Online,
You never know what can happen."

Also,Thanks to recent MasterClass Guests, Luke Ryan, New Line Cinema; John Fox, DreamWorks;
Ryan Engle, Kopelson Entertainment; Margo Klewans, Landscape Pictures;
Matt Bedrosian and Valarie Phillips, Paradigm Agency;
Entertainment Attorney, Jeff Frankel; Aaron Kaplan, Kaplan/Perrone Entertainment;
Sheila Hanahan Taylor, Practical-Pictures; Alex Franklin, Dimension Films;
Tai Duncan, Paul Schiff Productions; Darryl Taja, Epidemic Pictures.
Literary Manager Brad Kaplan, Evolution Entertainment;
Literary Manager/Producer Colin O'Reilly, Smart Entertainment;
Screenwriter Tom Lazarus (Stigmata), Mosaic Media Group's, Alex Ankeles;
and MTA agent, Ryan Saul; Max Roman, Innovative Artists; Gaye Hirsch, Cruise/Wagner Productions;
And Jeff Katz, New Line Cinema for more fantastic evenings at Screenwriters Online.

BLAKE SNYDER
Screenwriter and Beloved Author of SAVE THE CAT
@ SCREENWRITERS ONLINE 2009


  • BLAKE SNYDER was a sweet man who loved screenwriters, writing and was genuinley turned on by the creative process.
    He inspired a generation of Screenwriting students who will miss him sorely. He unexepctedly died of cardiac arrest August 4, 2009. Some of our students were planning to take Blake's class later this week in Los Angeles. Everyone is in shock...and very sad.
    He wrote a dozen films and wrote what many consider a BIBLE for screenwriters called: SAVE THE CAT
    It is a book beyond forumlas. It addresses the heart and mind of the screenwriter and from that place leads them to their movie.

    We were thrilled to have him as a Screenwriters Online MasterClass Special Guest in February of 2009

    We had a great night. It was fun and a great lift to all the screenwriters who joined online that night

    Here, from his night with us, are a few snippets of his wit and wisdom

    Blake will continue to inspire us through his books and his words and his work.


    BLAKE SNYDER
    Here's some good stuff
    from his ONLINE MASTERCLASS Session with us.

    QUESTION:
    Thank you for coming to Screenwriters Online
    How are you?

    BLAKE SNYDER: This phase of my career is the best so far. I still love screenwriting, but working with other writers, answering questions, I love it and I do it all day long.
    I get emails from writers all the time. Sometimes I talk to people on the phone who are having problems with their scripts.
    I've been there.
    To me, it's clear what's wrong, the answer so simple sometimes, I'd rather tell them now than have them waste time.
    QUESTION:
    Will you talk about IDENTIFYING YOUR HERO?

    BLAKE SNYDER: This is one of the first questions a screenwriter has for a troubled screenplay.
    Identifying who the hero is, is tricky and not always based on a specific storytelling problem.
    Sometimes it's a marketing problem.
    I recently sold a script called GRANNY.
    Here's the pitch: a senior serial killer who kills teenagers who violate the rules of etiquette. Here's the poster line: "Granny. She's off her rocker."
    I got this idea at the Beverly Center.
    But my problem as a screenwriter is I had the wrong hero.
    I had 10 drafts that didn't sell because of it.
    Story is a crazy old lady who escapes from St. Vitas for the Criminally Insane shows up on the doorstep of a family.
    They just lost the wife, and the woman claims to be the wife's long lost grandmother.
    The person answering the door who lets the serial killer in in my first 10 drafts that did not sell was the dad.
    Wife recently dead.
    Two kids.
    AMBER, a precocious 16 year old girl.
    BEN, the 10 year old little brother.
    But 40 year old men don't see these movies; teenagers do.
    In the draft that sold, the person who answered the door is Amber.
    Now it's her story.
    All the beats are the same in the script, but it's from a different point of view.
    Again, more cold water: it was the rejection of having the script not sell that
    made me examine it and try to figure out a better hero for it.
    I had a blind spot.
    I was a 40-year-old man. I figured I'd be the most interesting man in the room.
    I had a blind spot and a prejudice about my story.
    And even me, who'd been in the business 20 years, should've known better.

    QUESTION:
    Can a screenwriter be commercial and still be meaningful and care about one's work?

    BLAKE SNYDER: This gets to a good point: can you write commercially and still find passion?
    I always do.
    I think I can find passion in any story, and it's from theme.
    I think this is a great thing to know for rewrites, assignments,
    and even things you might not be drawn to at first but know are good for your career.
    GRANNY started from the fact that the horror genre was hot.
    I wanted to get in on it.
    I wanted to write a horror movie.
    But it wasn't until literally I was at the Beverly Center
    and saw a group of teenagers waiting at the elevator with me.
    When the doors opened, they all pushed past the people trying to get off the elevator.
    I said to myself, Tsk tsk. Kids today. Where are the manners?
    And standing next to me was a sweet little old lady with the same expression on her face.
    And I thought, What if you gave her a knife?
    But as smart as that is, it's just a new Freddy, a new Chucky.
    It's a good poster, but where was my passion for the project?
    I found it in the fact that I really am an etiquette bug. I really do get mad at rude drivers. And I found a voice in Granny.
    I think that's true in any story you tell.
    That's the best thing about writing genre.
    You can bury messages in the B Story that mean a lot to you and still deliver on a script that can sell.
    I work with writers on the phone a lot now.
    They tell me their story.
    We play around with elements, but what I'm really trying to get from them is why they're writing it.
    And when we pick out a theme, that's when it really gets great.
    Even the silliest comedy, even the most "commercial" movie must have a theme and a passion for you that means something.
    And we'll find it if we just keep looking.

    QUESTION:
    *Bradford* Blake I love the GRANNY story idea. Is Robin Williams gonna play the old lady?

    BLAKE SNYDER: MRS. HELLFIRE

    QUESTION:
    *Bradford* By the way, I had no idea you'd sold GRANNY when I sent you my short, GRANNY VERSUS ZOMBIE.

    BLAKE SNYDER: Hey Bradford! Bradford is a great guy and a great writer.
    COMMENT:
    *McVee* So says Bradford all the time!

    COMMENT:
    *Bradford* Yikes! Thanks! Five bucks is in the mail.

    BLAKE SNYDER: :)



    QUESTION:
    *daisyandmarl* What is the theme of Plane, trains? Love?

    BLAKE SNYDER: It's, "Like your work, love your wife."

    Here's a guy who was working too hard and neglecting his family.
    That's what he learns, ironically from a guy who doesn't have a family.
    Theme is not an abstract noun.
    It's the lesson.
    "Love" is not a theme.
    "Forgiveness" is not a theme.
    That's why I say Theme Stated.
    It's a proclamation, and what this movie will debate is whether or not it's true.
    And by the way, that's what the movie will debate in every scene.
    We'll see this theme debated from a million different perspectives and really wring it out in the course of this story.
    So pick a theme that you can state in a declarative sentence.
    And have somebody say it to the hero early on, and have him be blind to it.
    If he wasn't blind, we'd have nowhere to go in the course of the story.

    LOG LINES


    QUESTION:
    *Mich* In CAT, Blake talks a lot about the importance of being a slave to your logline
    and not straying from it as a way of keeping your story on track.
    BLAKE, At what point in your writing career did you realize the importance of being a slave to your logline?
    Was it an ah-hah moment or something that you knew all along?

    BLAKE SNYDER: Mich, great question.

    Thanks for reading my book and learning I think its most powerful lesson.
    Chapter One is called What Is It?
    Log line is premise.
    It's the poster of your movie.
    It's your pitch.
    And a good one is the coin of the realm.
    When I come up with a great log line, I can tell my agent,
    he can get right away and tell a producer, who can get on the phone and tell a studio executive,
    and when the movie comes out, they can tell you, the audience.
    Encapsulating your idea into something everyone can understand is a great skill.
    Figuring that out, for me, was indeed an A-Ha! moment
    and the change in my career from in the wilderness to the promised land, to quote a little Old Testament.
    I love a great log line.
    COMMENT:
    *Bradford* Blake, tonight ROCKS and is a great supliment to my dog-eared SAVE THE CAT BLAKE SNYDER: That's nice. COMMENT:
    *daisyandmarl* Good stuff!
    *debbiebb* I second that emotion!
    BLAKE SNYDER: These are great questions. You're a smart group.
    BLAKE SNYDER: Someone is mentoring you very well.
    SCREENWRITERS ONLINE: Thank you. ;)


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WRITING THE BEST LOG LINE FOR YOUR QUERY LETTER

This LOG LINE WRITING CLASS is unique.
We're going away from the text books and
into the Hollywood trenches,
into the real world where your log line must sell.

If you're not getting read, do this class. You need a fresh approach.
A real approach. Put it to the test this week. The Query Writing Class begins.

We are fotunate to have a super bright, experienced producer/manager teach this class.
An INDUSTRY PRO who listens to pitches day and night, and pursues the scripts
of those he likes; and options or represents the Screenwriters if the Script delivers!

They bought TOWN CREEK, written by Dave Kajganich,
Joel Schumacher directed, and it will be released by Lionsgate.
They bought BOUNTY HUNTER which is currently in preproduction and
will begin shooting in New York on June 15th starring Gerard Butler and
Jennifer Aniston, with Andy Tennant directing.

This Development Exec/Manager is the one guiding you to a LOG LINE
That can put you back in the market!

Even if you've taken a query writing class before, put that behind you.
TAKE THIS ONE. It's time for current market place feedback and help!

Today, writing a good log line, meaning ONE THAT SELLS,
requires an outside, experienced eye ...
It's gotten so specialized that to write one that sells,
one needs the aid of expert who is not only a buyer,
but a great terrific teacher, developer and producer.

It's Crucial.
Getting the help of an experienced pro who understands your idea;
who can help you bring out its strengths, and feature what is most commercially
appealing about your idea is CRUCIAL in today's market.

Great LOG LINES are essential. More and more, The Agents, Studio Execs and Producers
only want a log line, not a synopsis. So the pressure is on.
Get a great log line. If they like that, they'll ask for the screenplay.

WHAT HAPPENS IN CLASS?
In the Query Writing class you get hands on attention working on YOUR LOG LINE.
Everyone gets individual attention helping them "find" their log lines.
Our Industry Expert will have written one for you based on the material
but it is important that you learn to find
your log line within your own writing.

You will receive our prized doc- QUERY LETTER DO and DON'TS
from our LIVE SESSION. This is an invaluable guide.
The transcript containing that is emailed to you once you join.
The Query Writing Class transcripts are RICH in information.
The light will go on in your brain a dozen times during this process.

COMMENTS:

"Tony, it was awesome. Thank you so much!!"
Devaki

"This has been life-altering. Super super super helpful!"
I can honestly say this has been the most valuable class to me of the mall.
Kelly F."

"Forever in your debt!
dolcevita

"Thanks so much Ryan. What a thrill having you."
SynthiaRose

"Ryan your patience and insights have been great!"
John K.

Join us! You get to Pitch AND write!

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SO MANY ARE CONFUSED ABOUT WHAT A GOOD LOG LINE IS.
So Our teacher is someone on the other side. A buyer and a representative
He knows what he and his colleagues want to see in a log line
In This Class he is teaching, and guiding and getting all our writers into
the best log line for their screenplay.

CAN SCREENWRITERS WITHOUT A "UNIQUE VOICE SELL SCREENPLAYS?"
YES. Many screenwriters don't have a unique voice or point of view
and yet they are very successful writers! They are successful because
they know how to pitch their scripts to sell--and in the end,
they can back that up with a good though not great screenplay.

So many have written asking for help with their Query Letters and Log Lines
(A one sentence synopsis of your screenplay.)
Learning how to write the "right" log line is often the first step in a successful sale.
It's all the buyers want to read or hear!



HOW DOES THE QUERY WRITING PART WORK? (A quick view)
a) You'll submit(email) a 2 paragraph telling of your story. (Synopsis)
Remember, it benefits you to be clear and succinct.
b) Along with this, you'll submit the LOGLINE you have written for your screenplay.
c) Our top Industry Expert will review the material and email her feedback.
d) Everyone will get individual attention helping them "find" their log lines.
both in class and off line in email.
e) Our Industry Expert will have written a log line for you based on the material
but it is important that you learn to find
your log line within your own writing.

Because time is a factor, some of the work will happen Online,
and some will continue through email. Or if you register for the class
but have a scheduling conflict on the LOG LINE nights,
we will do the work through email.

We'll provide more detail once you've joined!

This week, Screenwriters Online presents a Big Combo!
A MasterClass Pitch Night plus a phenomenal Screenwriting Class!

The LOG LINE WRITING CLASS
continues this week, through EMAIL.
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Join us! You get to Pitch AND write a new more powerful LOG LINE!
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SEE WOODY'S "WHATEVER WORKS"


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WHATEVER WORKS,
SEE OUR LIVE INTERVIEW WITH
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But most of All GO SEE WHATEVER WORKS!
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CONGRATULATIONS!
Screenwriter, Producer Andrew Stanton!


  • ANDREW STANTON
    Producer, Screenwriter and former Screenwriters Online Special Guest!
    He won the OSCAR for BEST ANIMATED FEATURE for FINDING NEMO, AND WALL-E

    as well as The GOLDEN GLOBE for WALL-E!

    We thank him for continuing to inspire his peers and all of us at Screenwriters Online.


    THANKS ANDREW!
    Here's some good stuff from his ONLINE MASTERCLASS Session with us.

    QUESTION:
    When you write your screenplays, is the audience you
    are aiming for, children, or their parents or both?

    Andrew Stanton: This is the biggest no-no of all when it comes to family
    films. If you are writing for anybody else but yourself, your screenplay will fail.
    The minute you start to second guess who your audience is,
    you start making limited choices and closing doors to possible solutions to your story.
    The minute you underestimate children, you're going to
    make something that is just pandering and annoying.
    The reason the Harry Potter books are so good is because
    they don't try to talk to anybody lower than your average adult.
    It's proven that if you make the story good enough, kids
    that can't read well will force themselves to learn to read better in order to
    enjoy the story.
    I feel the same way about film. There's no reason I should
    have to dumb-down my filmic grammar.
    If the story is told well enough, the kids will get it or work
    harder at getting it and everybody wins.
    Whenever I bring my kids to school, I often get a parent
    saying my kids love your movies and you know we love them too.
    I always respond, "Good. I wrote them for you, not for the kids."
    The only consideration I give children is that I try not to
    put anything in the movies that have questionable morals or might be
    offensive -- anything that might exclude them, but that's it.
    I usually think about that very late in the game like usually
    on the last year of working on the picture is when I think about those things.

    QUESTION:
    I know people say "write what you know" but isn't it sometimes a
    good idea to write what you WANT to know? To learn the truth in something?

    Andrew Stanton: Exactly. I always say either write what you know or know
    what you write.

    Nemo is a perfect example. I knew nothing about fish,
    dentistry, Australia, and spent 2 years researching all of it.
    That's part of the fun.
    But hopefully whatever is the emotional point of your
    movie is something you can relate to and that you do know.
    If you've never experienced a death in the family, how on
    earth can you write about it?

    QUESTION:
    Which comes first, the screenplay or the storyboard for animation?

    Andrew Stanton: The script comes first and then the storyboards usually
    come into play once we feel about 70% confident with the script.
    In other words, all of the bones are there and the scenes
    feel like they're working right overall.
    Then, both script rewriting and storyboarding are on
    parallel tracks until the completion of the movie.
    There are some ideas you just can't come up with or
    wouldn't like unless you see them visually.
    The same goes with the written word, so I'm a believer in both.





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Rich Wilkes, Screenwriter (XXX)
Brian Helgeland, Screenwriter("A Knights Tale," "L.A. Confidential")
Scott Aversano, President/Producer (MTV Films)
Randall Wallace, Screenwriter ("Braveheart," "We Were Soldiers")
Scott Frank, Screenwriter (Minority Report, Get Shorty)
Gaye Hirsch, Executive (CW Television Network)
Stacey Sher, Co-Chair/Partner (Double Feature Films)
Frank Darabont, Screenwriter (Shawshank Redemption)
Kim Roth, Vp Production("Imagine Entertainment")
Phillipa Burgess, Partner/Producer(Creative Convergence)
John Eskow, Screenwriter (Mask Of Zorro)
Marsha Oglesby, Producer/SrVPDevelopment&Production(Brooklyn Films)
Emile Gladstone, Agent (ICM)
Adam Levine, Agent (Endeavor)
Dawn Saltzman, Agent (Endeavor)
Phillipa Boyens and Fran Walsh, Screenwriters (Lord of the Rings, The Two Towers)
Nicole Clemens, Agent
Ed Solomon, Screenwriter (Men In Black, Bill & Ted's Excellent Adventure)
Maha Dahkil, Agent (Creative Artists Agency)
Query Letter Class, Writing the Perfect Logline and Synopsis to make the sale!
(ICM)
Jeff Nathanson, Screenwriter (Catch Me If You Can, Rush Hour)
Susannah Grant, Screenwriter (Erin Brockovich)
Jennifer Fox, President (Soderberg's prodco Section Eight)
Caroline Thompson, Screenwriter("Edward Scissorhands,""The Addams Family")
Jennifer Davisson,Literary Manager("The Firm")
Akiva Goldsman, (Oscar winning Screenwriter,"A Beautiful Mind")
Ken Nolan, Screenwriter ("Blackhawk Down")
Julian Fellowes, Oscar winning screenwriter ("Gosford Park")
Robert Towne, Screenwriter ("China Town")
Steve Kloves, Screenwriter ("Harry Potter"The Fabulous Baker Boys," "Wonder Boys")









Ohio Native, Ryan Smith Comes To Hollywood


Ryan Smith was chosen one of the Top Five
in Screenwriters Online's "Next Draft Class "
(our virtual development/screenwriting rewrite course.)
RANDOM THOUGHTS ON SELF DESTRUCTION,
the screenplay he completed here,
has been named one of the TOP TEN finalists
(out of 6000+ screenplays) in the prestigious
Nicholl Fellowship Screenwriting competition.

Ryan has had 120 requests for his screenplay.
His agent, gained through Screenwriters Online,
has block booked him for a week of meetings with some
of the best producers and companies Hollywood has to offer.

Congratulations Ryan!

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ERIC ROTH

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SALUTATIONS TO ONE OF OUR GREAT MASTERCLASS IN SCREENWRITING SPECIAL GUESTS

pic of Eric RothERIC ROTH
OSCAR WINNING SCREENWRITER
FORREST GUMP

In the movie pantheon, Eric Roth is one of the gods of Screenwriting.
Eric won the Oscarfor the blockbusting cultural phenomenon "Forrest Gump."
At the age of 63, he remains among the most sought after, critically acclaimed, highest paid screenwriters.

Eric wrote the big Christmas event movie,
"The Curious Case of Benjamin Button" starring Brad Pitt, directed by David Fincher.

We always love it when he joins us live. Every other word is a pearl of wisdom
- - The only thing, He doesn't think so!!! Brilliant insight is second nature to him, now.

Ask us fot the transcript to one of his classes here.
It'll anchor you in the true ground of great screenwriting.
Take the time to review his movies (they're so worthwhile)
The man is a heavyweight.
So much to learn. Eric Roth, at Screennwriters Online, is always a true Masterclass In Sceenwriting

Other great Eric Roth Screenplays:

The Insider, The Good Shepherd, Munich, Ali, The Horse Whisperer,

Check them out on DVD.